The room they had put him in was, objectively speaking, a guest room. Renji had established this by the time the light coming through the window had shifted from black to the particular deep blue of pre-dawn, before he had slept and after he had made his notes. The bed was narrow but not uncomfortable. The water in the pitcher was cold and tasted of stone and something green, not unpleasantly. The lamp burned through the night without diminishing. These were the qualities of a room maintained for the accommodation of guests, not for the detention of prisoners, though the lock on the outside of the door suggested the distinction was not absolute.
He had slept four hours. He knew this because his phone still worked even without signal, and when he woke it showed four hours elapsed since the timestamp of the last report he had opened, which was his best available proxy for when he had fallen asleep at his desk. Four hours was less than he preferred and more than he would have expected, given the circumstances.
He sat at the table and ate half the granola bar from his document bag and drank the rest of the water and listened to the building.
The building had sounds. Not like an office building, where the sounds were mechanical and human and predictable. These sounds were older, some of them, and carried the quality of something that had been doing what it was doing for long enough that it had developed its own rhythm, its own language of small creaks and resonances. Footsteps beyond the door. Voices in the corridor, not close enough to parse. Once, something that might have been the distant sound of wind in a forest, though there were thick stone walls between him and any forest.
He was waiting.
He was, specifically, waiting to find out what they had decided to do with him. The night before, in the immediate aftermath of the ritual and the very brief conversation with Miron Pell, there had not been time for a decision of the kind that required deliberation. The High Oracle Caerion had made a provisional call, which was: keep him for questioning. That was a temporary measure, not a policy. Policies required discussion.
They were discussing him somewhere in this building.
He would very much like to know what they were deciding.
The lock disengaged at what he estimated was mid-morning, based on the quality of light coming through the window. Miron Pell came in, and behind Miron Pell came a younger elf with a tray of food, and behind the elf with the tray came two taller figures who were clearly not there to carry trays.
Miron said: The Council has met. They wish to speak with you.
Renji set down his pen. He had been making notes. He would keep making notes. The notes were not specifically about Elyndor yet, because he did not yet have enough information for specific notes. They were about procedure. About what questions to ask. About what kind of organization this appeared to be, based on the limited evidence he had so far.
Before we go, he said, I have some questions.
Miron exchanged a glance with one of the taller figures, who did not appear to speak English but clearly registered the intent of the statement.
The Council is waiting, Miron said.
I understand that. I also find it useful to have some basic information before a meeting, so I can make the meeting more productive for everyone. It usually takes less time than going in without it.
Miron looked at him for a moment. Then he sat down across from him, which was not what Renji had expected but was useful. The taller figures remained near the door.
What do you want to know? Miron asked.
Renji thought about how to prioritize. There were many things he wanted to know. He would not get all of them answered before the meeting, and the meeting itself was a source of information, so there was a point beyond which preparation became counterproductive.
The Council, he said. What do they want from this meeting?
Miron considered this seriously, which Renji appreciated. He said: To understand what you are and what to do about you.
And the options they are likely to consider?
Miron was quiet for long enough that Renji understood the answer was not entirely comfortable. There are several, he said finally. Some more permanent than others.
Renji nodded. He had gathered that much. The question is what makes the less permanent options more appealing to them than the more permanent ones.
Miron looked at him with something that was beginning to look like respect, in the careful way that respect forms between people who recognize a mode of thinking in each other. He said: Caerion is not a man who destroys things that might be useful.
Then I should make myself useful in a way that he can see clearly, Renji said.
That, said Miron, would be my advice as well.
They went to the Council.
The chamber was larger than the ritual room, which Renji had not expected, and it had the quality of a room in which weight was regularly added rather than regularly removed. The weight of decisions, specifically. The walls were lined with records, or what served as records here, and the light came from the same sourceless warmth as the rest of the building, and at the center of it sat a long table around which seven figures were arranged in the specific configuration of people who have been deliberating and have reached a conclusion they are ready to communicate.
Caerion sat at the head. His expression had the quality of polished stone: smooth, reflective, revealing nothing about its own internal composition.
Miron translated throughout. The conversation that followed was, by the standards of the conversations Renji had participated in over the course of his professional life, surprisingly direct.
The Council had determined, Caerion explained through Miron, that the ritual error had occurred due to an imprecision in the translation of the summoning invocation. The word that had been intended to call a hero had, through some textual decay in the oldest layer of the working, been rendered in a way that could also be interpreted as calling a verifier. A checker of records. Someone who examined documents for inconsistencies.
Renji listened to this with careful attention and said nothing until Miron finished.
Then he said: The translation called the wrong kind of person.
Through Miron: That is one way to describe it.
And the correct translation would have called a silver-haired hero.
Yes.
Who is also being expected?
Thalion Orr. Yes. He will arrive at the palace shortly. The ritual drew from both sources, it appears, due to the textual ambiguity.
Renji looked at Caerion. Caerion looked at Renji. There was a quality to Caerion's gaze that Renji had encountered only a few times before, in certain kinds of very experienced administrators: the quality of a man who was making several calculations simultaneously and doing it invisibly.
What do you intend to do with me? Renji asked.
The translation, the deliberation, the answer:
The High Oracle believes you may be useful in the verification of certain ritual documentation before the Blue Moon ceremony. You are therefore to be retained as a temporary consultant. You will have supervised access to the public sections of the Royal Archive. You will not attempt to leave Elyndor. You will cooperate with the ceremonies and their requirements.
Renji said: And if I find something wrong in the documentation?
A pause. Then Caerion spoke directly, a single short sentence, and Miron translated: You are a verifier. If you find nothing, that is also useful.
Renji looked at the room. He looked at the records lining the walls. He looked at the seven figures around the table, and at Caerion at the head of it, and at the expression on Caerion's face, which was composed and patient and which contained, underneath the composition and the patience, something he would only later be able to name precisely.
He thought about the fourteen line items on his desk in Tokyo. He thought about the rounding pattern. He thought about the coffee machine.
He thought about the note he had made the night before: my presence here has value to him that he does not yet want to eliminate. Find out what that value is.
He thought: he wanted me to say yes before I asked about finding errors.
He filed this under: noted. Under: do not draw conclusions before confirming with source files. Under: watch carefully.
I accept the role, he said. I would like to begin with the earliest extant copy of the Verdant Prophecy.
Caerion, through Miron: That will be arranged.
He rose from the table, and the meeting was over, and Renji was escorted back to his room, and as the door closed he sat down and picked up his pen and added to his Day 1 notes: retained as consultant. Access to public Archive. The High Oracle said yes to a document review before I asked what I would do if I found errors. He wanted my presence confirmed before that question was raised.
He underlined the last sentence.
He wrote: this is not a man who makes careless decisions. He kept me alive because I am useful. He accepted my conditions because controlling the scope of my usefulness is more important to him than refusing the conditions. He is not afraid of what I will find in the public Archive. He is afraid of what I might find that is not in the public Archive.
He put the pen down.
He ate the other half of the granola bar.
The coffee machine, he wrote at the bottom of the page, is probably fine.
The formal document arrived the next morning. He read every clause. He added one clarification in the margin, initialed it, and sent it back. The amended version returned within the hour, with Caerion's seal already on it. The speed told him something: the amendment had been anticipated.
He filed the document in his bag next to the fourteen-item rounding error report that had started all of this. Different jurisdiction. Same principle.
He went back to the Archive.
Lysera Vey was already there, at her usual position at the far end of the reading table, working through what appeared to be a cataloguing task. She looked up when he entered, looked at his document bag, and said: You accepted the consultancy.
He said: Yes. He sat down. He pulled out his notebook. He said: What do you know about the period three hundred years ago? The period of significant conflict you mentioned.
She looked at him for a moment with the measuring quality he was learning to read as a sign that she was deciding how much of something to give him.
She said: There was a war. Or the beginning of one. A dispute over the borders of Veylwood, and the rights of those who lived within them versus those who lived outside. It was resolved before it became fully catastrophic, but not before significant decisions were made about how Elyndor would understand itself going forward.
He said: And the Prophecy?
She said: The Prophecy was central to the resolution. The Council of that time used it to unify the kingdom around a common external threat.
He said: The Black Dragon.
She said: Yes.
He wrote this down. He wrote: common external threat, manufactured or emphasized for unity purposes. He had seen this before. In organizations, in markets, in smaller human systems. The mechanisms were consistent regardless of scale.
He said: Who were the people outside Veylwood?
She had returned to her cataloguing. She said, without looking up: That is a question for the restricted archive.
He wrote: restricted. He underlined it. He put a star next to it.
He thought about the symbol on the wall. He thought about Fen and where the fox went.
He opened the first correspondence file and began to read.
The afternoon passed in the way that afternoons passed when he was doing the kind of work that required sustained attention and produced the particular satisfaction of a pattern resolving itself from noise. He found three things in the correspondence files that he wrote down and starred. He found one thing that he stared at for a long time before writing down, because it required thinking about what it implied before he was ready to commit the implication to paper.
At the end of the afternoon he had a list. Not a conclusion. A list of things that needed further investigation, with notes on what each thing's significance might be if the further investigation confirmed it.
He was very careful, in his lists, to distinguish between what he had observed and what he was inferring from the observation. This was a professional habit and also an ethical one. He had seen what happened when people stopped making that distinction. He had, in a sense, built his professional life around the consequences of that kind of slippage.
He added a note at the bottom of the list: tomorrow, ask Lysera about the original binding ceremony. If the Prophecy is structural, as she described, then the original ceremony that established the binding should have documentation. Find the documentation. Find what it says the binding actually requires.
He packed up his bag.
He went to his room.
He lay down on the narrow bed and stared at the vaulted ceiling and thought about fourteen line items and a rounding pattern and a company whose CFO had a brother-in-law on the board, and he thought about what he knew now that he had not known six days ago, which was: some documents are very old and some are less old and the difference between them, in certain specific places, is not the passage of time but the passage of a decision. Someone had decided. He was going to find out who.
The guards who escorted him to and from the Council chamber were, he noted, not Nightroot Guard. They were a different unit, one he had not encountered before, with a quieter quality to their efficiency. They did not speak to him. They did not look at him with hostility or suspicion, merely with the professional attention of people whose job was to be aware of where he was at all times. He found this preferable to hostility. Hostility implied investment. Professional attention was just procedure.
He wondered what Caerion had told them he was. Dangerous was unlikely, given the level of the escort and the relative freedom of his movement. Fragile was also unlikely, for the same reason. Useful but uncertain, he thought. That was the category that produced this specific kind of careful, arms-length attention.
The note he had written about the coffee machine, at the bottom of that first day's page, had started to seem like a marker of something he hadn't had a name for at the time. He was beginning to have a name for it now.
It was the last thing he had thought about that was entirely within the normal frame of his life. Everything since had required a different frame. He was still using the same tools, the same methods, the same habits of careful attention and documented observation. But the thing those tools were being applied to was entirely new.
He was, he reflected, more comfortable with this than he would have expected.
This told him something about himself that he noted without particular judgment: the work was the anchor. Wherever he was, as long as there were records with discrepancies that needed to be found and documented, he knew what to do. That was either a strength or a pathology, and he had made peace with the possibility that it was both.
The day ended. He sat with his notes. He wrote one more thing before he slept: I am going to find what was changed and when and by whose decision. Not because I have anything to gain from it here. Because the numbers either match or they don't.
He thought, before he slept, about the question of what it meant to be kept. Not imprisoned, exactly. Not free, exactly. Something in between, which in his experience was often where the most interesting information lived. The space between the official category and the actual situation was a gap, and gaps had content.
The content of this gap, as he understood it so far: Caerion needed him visible and controlled. The consultancy formalized the control. The agreement about reporting his findings gave Caerion the appearance of transparency while maintaining oversight of what Renji found and when it became available to others. It was a very clean arrangement.
It was also, he noted, an arrangement that assumed he would find things. An arrangement that assumed nothing would have set up a review at all.
In the morning the work would continue. The records would be there. The discrepancies would be there. Everything he had found so far would still be true in the morning, and there would be more. There always was.
He had learned this in nine years of finding things that were wrong in documents that institutions did not want found: there was always more. Fraud was not a discrete event. It was a practice. Practices left layers. Layers could be found.
He closed the notebook. He looked at the ceiling. The lamp burned without consuming anything visible. He thought about rounding errors and documents and the specific weight of nine years of work done correctly for its own sake, and he thought that whatever this was, he knew how to do it, and he was going to do it right. He slept well, for the first time in many nights. The work would be there in the morning. It was always there in the morning. That was the thing about discrepancies: they did not resolve themselves overnight.
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The room they had put him in was, objectively speaking, a guest room. Renji had established this by the time the light coming through the window had shifted from black to the particular deep blue of pre-dawn, before he had slept and after he had made his notes. The bed was narrow but not uncomfortable. The water in the pitcher was cold and tasted of stone and something green, not unpleasantly. The lamp burned through the night without diminishing. These were the qualities of a room maintained for the accommodation of guests, not for the detention of prisoners, though the lock on the outside of the door suggested the distinction was not absolute.
He had slept four hours. He knew this because his phone still worked even without signal, and when he woke it showed four hours elapsed since the timestamp of the last report he had opened, which was his best available proxy for when he had fallen asleep at his desk. Four hours was less than he preferred and more than he would have expected, given the circumstances.
He sat at the table and ate half the granola bar from his document bag and drank the rest of the water and listened to the building.
The building had sounds. Not like an office building, where the sounds were mechanical and human and predictable. These sounds were older, some of them, and carried the quality of something that had been doing what it was doing for long enough that it had developed its own rhythm, its own language of small creaks and resonances. Footsteps beyond the door. Voices in the corridor, not close enough to parse. Once, something that might have been the distant sound of wind in a forest, though there were thick stone walls between him and any forest.
He was waiting.
He was, specifically, waiting to find out what they had decided to do with him. The night before, in the immediate aftermath of the ritual and the very brief conversation with Miron Pell, there had not been time for a decision of the kind that required deliberation. The High Oracle Caerion had made a provisional call, which was: keep him for questioning. That was a temporary measure, not a policy. Policies required discussion.
They were discussing him somewhere in this building.
He would very much like to know what they were deciding.
The lock disengaged at what he estimated was mid-morning, based on the quality of light coming through the window. Miron Pell came in, and behind Miron Pell came a younger elf with a tray of food, and behind the elf with the tray came two taller figures who were clearly not there to carry trays.
Miron said: The Council has met. They wish to speak with you.
Renji set down his pen. He had been making notes. He would keep making notes. The notes were not specifically about Elyndor yet, because he did not yet have enough information for specific notes. They were about procedure. About what questions to ask. About what kind of organization this appeared to be, based on the limited evidence he had so far.
Before we go, he said, I have some questions.
Miron exchanged a glance with one of the taller figures, who did not appear to speak English but clearly registered the intent of the statement.
The Council is waiting, Miron said.
I understand that. I also find it useful to have some basic information before a meeting, so I can make the meeting more productive for everyone. It usually takes less time than going in without it.
Miron looked at him for a moment. Then he sat down across from him, which was not what Renji had expected but was useful. The taller figures remained near the door.
What do you want to know? Miron asked.
Renji thought about how to prioritize. There were many things he wanted to know. He would not get all of them answered before the meeting, and the meeting itself was a source of information, so there was a point beyond which preparation became counterproductive.
The Council, he said. What do they want from this meeting?
Miron considered this seriously, which Renji appreciated. He said: To understand what you are and what to do about you.
And the options they are likely to consider?
Miron was quiet for long enough that Renji understood the answer was not entirely comfortable. There are several, he said finally. Some more permanent than others.
Renji nodded. He had gathered that much. The question is what makes the less permanent options more appealing to them than the more permanent ones.
Miron looked at him with something that was beginning to look like respect, in the careful way that respect forms between people who recognize a mode of thinking in each other. He said: Caerion is not a man who destroys things that might be useful.
Then I should make myself useful in a way that he can see clearly, Renji said.
That, said Miron, would be my advice as well.
They went to the Council.
The chamber was larger than the ritual room, which Renji had not expected, and it had the quality of a room in which weight was regularly added rather than regularly removed. The weight of decisions, specifically. The walls were lined with records, or what served as records here, and the light came from the same sourceless warmth as the rest of the building, and at the center of it sat a long table around which seven figures were arranged in the specific configuration of people who have been deliberating and have reached a conclusion they are ready to communicate.
Caerion sat at the head. His expression had the quality of polished stone: smooth, reflective, revealing nothing about its own internal composition.
Miron translated throughout. The conversation that followed was, by the standards of the conversations Renji had participated in over the course of his professional life, surprisingly direct.
The Council had determined, Caerion explained through Miron, that the ritual error had occurred due to an imprecision in the translation of the summoning invocation. The word that had been intended to call a hero had, through some textual decay in the oldest layer of the working, been rendered in a way that could also be interpreted as calling a verifier. A checker of records. Someone who examined documents for inconsistencies.
Renji listened to this with careful attention and said nothing until Miron finished.
Then he said: The translation called the wrong kind of person.
Through Miron: That is one way to describe it.
And the correct translation would have called a silver-haired hero.
Yes.
Who is also being expected?
Thalion Orr. Yes. He will arrive at the palace shortly. The ritual drew from both sources, it appears, due to the textual ambiguity.
Renji looked at Caerion. Caerion looked at Renji. There was a quality to Caerion's gaze that Renji had encountered only a few times before, in certain kinds of very experienced administrators: the quality of a man who was making several calculations simultaneously and doing it invisibly.
What do you intend to do with me? Renji asked.
The translation, the deliberation, the answer:
The High Oracle believes you may be useful in the verification of certain ritual documentation before the Blue Moon ceremony. You are therefore to be retained as a temporary consultant. You will have supervised access to the public sections of the Royal Archive. You will not attempt to leave Elyndor. You will cooperate with the ceremonies and their requirements.
Renji said: And if I find something wrong in the documentation?
A pause. Then Caerion spoke directly, a single short sentence, and Miron translated: You are a verifier. If you find nothing, that is also useful.
Renji looked at the room. He looked at the records lining the walls. He looked at the seven figures around the table, and at Caerion at the head of it, and at the expression on Caerion's face, which was composed and patient and which contained, underneath the composition and the patience, something he would only later be able to name precisely.
He thought about the fourteen line items on his desk in Tokyo. He thought about the rounding pattern. He thought about the coffee machine.
He thought about the note he had made the night before: my presence here has value to him that he does not yet want to eliminate. Find out what that value is.
He thought: he wanted me to say yes before I asked about finding errors.
He filed this under: noted. Under: do not draw conclusions before confirming with source files. Under: watch carefully.
I accept the role, he said. I would like to begin with the earliest extant copy of the Verdant Prophecy.
Caerion, through Miron: That will be arranged.
He rose from the table, and the meeting was over, and Renji was escorted back to his room, and as the door closed he sat down and picked up his pen and added to his Day 1 notes: retained as consultant. Access to public Archive. The High Oracle said yes to a document review before I asked what I would do if I found errors. He wanted my presence confirmed before that question was raised.
He underlined the last sentence.
He wrote: this is not a man who makes careless decisions. He kept me alive because I am useful. He accepted my conditions because controlling the scope of my usefulness is more important to him than refusing the conditions. He is not afraid of what I will find in the public Archive. He is afraid of what I might find that is not in the public Archive.
He put the pen down.
He ate the other half of the granola bar.
The coffee machine, he wrote at the bottom of the page, is probably fine.
The formal document arrived the next morning. He read every clause. He added one clarification in the margin, initialed it, and sent it back. The amended version returned within the hour, with Caerion's seal already on it. The speed told him something: the amendment had been anticipated.
He filed the document in his bag next to the fourteen-item rounding error report that had started all of this. Different jurisdiction. Same principle.
He went back to the Archive.
Lysera Vey was already there, at her usual position at the far end of the reading table, working through what appeared to be a cataloguing task. She looked up when he entered, looked at his document bag, and said: You accepted the consultancy.
He said: Yes. He sat down. He pulled out his notebook. He said: What do you know about the period three hundred years ago? The period of significant conflict you mentioned.
She looked at him for a moment with the measuring quality he was learning to read as a sign that she was deciding how much of something to give him.
She said: There was a war. Or the beginning of one. A dispute over the borders of Veylwood, and the rights of those who lived within them versus those who lived outside. It was resolved before it became fully catastrophic, but not before significant decisions were made about how Elyndor would understand itself going forward.
He said: And the Prophecy?
She said: The Prophecy was central to the resolution. The Council of that time used it to unify the kingdom around a common external threat.
He said: The Black Dragon.
She said: Yes.
He wrote this down. He wrote: common external threat, manufactured or emphasized for unity purposes. He had seen this before. In organizations, in markets, in smaller human systems. The mechanisms were consistent regardless of scale.
He said: Who were the people outside Veylwood?
She had returned to her cataloguing. She said, without looking up: That is a question for the restricted archive.
He wrote: restricted. He underlined it. He put a star next to it.
He thought about the symbol on the wall. He thought about Fen and where the fox went.
He opened the first correspondence file and began to read.
The afternoon passed in the way that afternoons passed when he was doing the kind of work that required sustained attention and produced the particular satisfaction of a pattern resolving itself from noise. He found three things in the correspondence files that he wrote down and starred. He found one thing that he stared at for a long time before writing down, because it required thinking about what it implied before he was ready to commit the implication to paper.
At the end of the afternoon he had a list. Not a conclusion. A list of things that needed further investigation, with notes on what each thing's significance might be if the further investigation confirmed it.
He was very careful, in his lists, to distinguish between what he had observed and what he was inferring from the observation. This was a professional habit and also an ethical one. He had seen what happened when people stopped making that distinction. He had, in a sense, built his professional life around the consequences of that kind of slippage.
He added a note at the bottom of the list: tomorrow, ask Lysera about the original binding ceremony. If the Prophecy is structural, as she described, then the original ceremony that established the binding should have documentation. Find the documentation. Find what it says the binding actually requires.
He packed up his bag.
He went to his room.
He lay down on the narrow bed and stared at the vaulted ceiling and thought about fourteen line items and a rounding pattern and a company whose CFO had a brother-in-law on the board, and he thought about what he knew now that he had not known six days ago, which was: some documents are very old and some are less old and the difference between them, in certain specific places, is not the passage of time but the passage of a decision. Someone had decided. He was going to find out who.
The guards who escorted him to and from the Council chamber were, he noted, not Nightroot Guard. They were a different unit, one he had not encountered before, with a quieter quality to their efficiency. They did not speak to him. They did not look at him with hostility or suspicion, merely with the professional attention of people whose job was to be aware of where he was at all times. He found this preferable to hostility. Hostility implied investment. Professional attention was just procedure.
He wondered what Caerion had told them he was. Dangerous was unlikely, given the level of the escort and the relative freedom of his movement. Fragile was also unlikely, for the same reason. Useful but uncertain, he thought. That was the category that produced this specific kind of careful, arms-length attention.
The note he had written about the coffee machine, at the bottom of that first day's page, had started to seem like a marker of something he hadn't had a name for at the time. He was beginning to have a name for it now.
It was the last thing he had thought about that was entirely within the normal frame of his life. Everything since had required a different frame. He was still using the same tools, the same methods, the same habits of careful attention and documented observation. But the thing those tools were being applied to was entirely new.
He was, he reflected, more comfortable with this than he would have expected.
This told him something about himself that he noted without particular judgment: the work was the anchor. Wherever he was, as long as there were records with discrepancies that needed to be found and documented, he knew what to do. That was either a strength or a pathology, and he had made peace with the possibility that it was both.
The day ended. He sat with his notes. He wrote one more thing before he slept: I am going to find what was changed and when and by whose decision. Not because I have anything to gain from it here. Because the numbers either match or they don't.
He thought, before he slept, about the question of what it meant to be kept. Not imprisoned, exactly. Not free, exactly. Something in between, which in his experience was often where the most interesting information lived. The space between the official category and the actual situation was a gap, and gaps had content.
The content of this gap, as he understood it so far: Caerion needed him visible and controlled. The consultancy formalized the control. The agreement about reporting his findings gave Caerion the appearance of transparency while maintaining oversight of what Renji found and when it became available to others. It was a very clean arrangement.
It was also, he noted, an arrangement that assumed he would find things. An arrangement that assumed nothing would have set up a review at all.
In the morning the work would continue. The records would be there. The discrepancies would be there. Everything he had found so far would still be true in the morning, and there would be more. There always was.
He had learned this in nine years of finding things that were wrong in documents that institutions did not want found: there was always more. Fraud was not a discrete event. It was a practice. Practices left layers. Layers could be found.
He closed the notebook. He looked at the ceiling. The lamp burned without consuming anything visible. He thought about rounding errors and documents and the specific weight of nine years of work done correctly for its own sake, and he thought that whatever this was, he knew how to do it, and he was going to do it right. He slept well, for the first time in many nights. The work would be there in the morning. It was always there in the morning. That was the thing about discrepancies: they did not resolve themselves overnight.
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