Miron was released on the morning of the twenty-fifth day.
Not by Caerion's direct order, or at least not visibly. The release was processed through the council records office's administrative protocol, with the notation that the detention had been resolved pending further investigation, which was the bureaucratic equivalent of a non-answer that allowed all parties to proceed without anyone explicitly acknowledging what had happened.
Miron arrived at the Archive with the expression of a man who had spent twenty-four hours in a very small room and had emerged from it more rather than less resolved about everything.
He said: They did not ask me anything.
Renji said: I know.
Miron said: They detained me and said nothing and then released me with a notation that further investigation was pending.
Renji said: Caerion is managing. The detention was a signal, not an interrogation. He wanted to show us that he could affect the process. He wanted to see how we would respond.
Miron said: How did you respond?
Renji said: I told him that we would proceed with or without his cooperation, starting this morning.
Miron said: And he released me.
Renji said: He released you. He looked at Miron carefully. Are you well?
Miron said: I am well. I am annoyed. He sat down. He said: I have been working on this for eleven years and I was detained for twenty-four hours the day after we found the evidence that completes the case. The timing is particularly frustrating.
He said: I know. That is my fault. I should have moved more quickly.
Miron said: You are not an expert in clandestine operations. Neither am I. We did what we could with the time and information we had. He paused. What happens now?
He said: Now we prepare the presentation. The ceremony is in four days. I want to present the covenant at the ceremony, in the presence of Ravenna and the Drakonir delegation, alongside the documented comparison of the covenant to the Prophecy. I want Thalion Orr to understand what the sword trial failure means before the ceremony proceeds.
Miron said: He will resist.
He said: Thalion Orr or Caerion?
Miron said: Both. But differently. Caerion will manage. Thalion Orr's resistance will be less calculated.
He said: I spoke with Thalion Orr yesterday. He has been holding an observation about the sword trial that he has not reported. I think he is closer to understanding than his public position suggests.
Miron said: How close?
He said: Close enough that the right conversation might take him the rest of the way. The problem is that the right conversation requires someone who understands what happened with the sword mechanism and can explain it to him in terms that are not threatening to everything he has built his identity around.
Miron said: Not you.
He said: Definitely not me. I am the verification consultant. I represent the challenge to his identity. He needs someone he trusts.
Miron said: Elirane.
He said: Elirane.
They sat with this for a moment.
Then Miron said: She is the Princess of Leaves. The Prophecy says he will marry her. She is, in his understanding of the world, his future. If she tells him the Prophecy is wrong about what he is supposed to do, the message comes from someone he is, by his conditioning, already predisposed to hear.
He said: Yes. He paused. I need to talk to her before I talk to him.
He thought, for a moment, about the specific shape of this situation: a man who had been prepared from childhood to be a hero in a specific narrative, and a woman who had been designated from childhood as a prize in that narrative, and both of them having come, independently and through different paths, to the understanding that the narrative was wrong. And the question of whether that shared understanding could become the basis for something different from what the narrative had planned for both of them.
He wrote: three days. Miron is back. Elirane needs to talk to Thalion Orr. Ravenna's delegation needs to arrive in the city without causing an incident. The comparison document needs to be delivered to the Council's administrative record so that it cannot be simply suppressed. And Caerion needs to decide whether he is going to manage the presentation or fight it, because that decision will determine the specific form the ceremony takes.
He wrote: I have been in Elyndor for twenty-five days. Three more.
He spent the afternoon of the twenty-fifth day distributing the comparison document.
Three copies, as planned: one to Lysera, one to Elirane, one to Ravenna. He also made a fourth copy and delivered it to the council records office with a formal request that it be entered into the administrative record as a verification consultant's finding in the consultancy contract between the Oracle's office and Renji Aoyama of Kamida Logistics Group's audit department, Tokyo, Japan.
The administrative clerk who received this fourth copy looked at it, looked at him, and looked at the cover page again. She said: This is a very long document.
He said: Yes.
She said: The subject is the Verdant Prophecy.
He said: Yes.
She said: The verification consultant's finding is that it is not original.
He said: The verification consultant's finding is that it is a modification of an earlier document, the Veylwood Covenant, and that the nature and extent of the modification is described in the forty-seven sections that follow.
She looked at him for a long moment. Then she date-stamped the document and entered it in the administrative record and put it in the files.
He said: I would like a receipt for the administrative submission.
She gave him a receipt. He folded the receipt and put it in his document bag, in the section he used for completed deliverables. He went back to the Archive.
Lysera said, when he returned: Did the submission go through?
He said: Yes. He showed her the receipt.
She looked at the receipt with the quality of attention she brought to documents that mattered. She said: Once it is in the administrative record, it requires a formal Council resolution to remove it. Caerion cannot remove it unilaterally.
He said: That is the point.
She said: Yes. She paused. You have been very systematic about this.
He said: I have been very systematic about everything. It is a professional habit.
She said, and there was something in her voice that was not quite amusement but was in its direction: I know. I have been watching for three weeks. She paused. I find it, if I am honest, rather admirable.
He said: The systematic part?
She said: All of it.
He processed this for a moment. He said: Thank you.
She said: You are welcome.
They returned to their work. The Archive was quiet. Three days remained.
The afternoon of the twenty-fifth day, with the comparison document distributed and Miron returned and the plan confirmed, had a quality that he recognized from prior engagements: the quality of the day before the delivery.
In his professional life, the day before the delivery of a major finding had a specific texture. The work was done. The documentation was complete. The presentation was prepared. There was nothing substantive left to do except wait for the moment when everything he had assembled would be placed before the people who needed to receive it and would either change things or not change them.
He had learned, over nine years of days-before-deliveries, that this particular texture was both clarifying and uncomfortable. Clarifying because the work was complete and nothing remained that required his specific attention. Uncomfortable because the absence of immediate work gave space to questions he had been too busy to fully address: was the case actually as strong as he believed it was, had he missed something, was there a flaw in the methodology that would undermine the presentation when it was under pressure.
He examined these questions systematically, because systematic examination was better than diffuse anxiety. The case was as strong as he believed it was. He had not missed anything significant. The methodology was sound. He had three independent lines of evidence converging on the same conclusion, which was the strongest evidentiary structure available in this kind of work.
He was ready.
He was also aware of a different quality of discomfort, one that was not professional but personal. He was aware of it in the way you become aware of something that has been present for a while when the other things that were occupying your attention subside. He was aware of it and he did not know what to do with it in the current context and so he put it in the same place he had been putting it and went back to working on the ceremonial schedule.
The distribution of the comparison document had been accomplished with a particular satisfaction he associated with the completion of a significant deliverable.
He had distributed findings before. He had sent reports through channels, submitted documentation to committees, provided evidence to regulatory bodies. In almost every case, the distribution had been a moment of release: here is what I found, the finding is now yours to do with what you will, my role in this specific engagement is complete.
This distribution felt different.
This distribution felt like the beginning rather than the completion of his role. Not because his role would extend beyond the ceremony. His role would probably end with the ceremony, or shortly after it. The loop would close. He would return to Tokyo.
But the distribution of this specific document, to these specific people, in this specific context, felt like an act of commitment rather than release. He was not releasing the finding. He was sharing it. There was a difference, and the difference was in the nature of the relationship between him and the people he was sharing it with.
In every prior engagement, the finding had been shared with people who were professionally obligated to receive it: boards, committees, regulatory bodies. They had not chosen to receive it. They had been required to receive it by the institutional structures that governed the engagement. The finding was a deliverable. They were the delivery destination. The relationship was professional and transactional.
Here the finding was shared with Lysera, who had spent sixty years preparing for the moment when this finding would be possible. With Elirane, who had been carrying a piece of the finding in the form of a childhood memory for eighty-four years. With Ravenna, who represented three hundred years of the other party holding their version of the same truth. The finding was shared with people who had skin in it, who had been part of producing it, who had a relationship to the truth it described that was personal rather than institutional.
He thought: I have never distributed a finding to people I cared about the outcome for before. I have cared about the outcome professionally, in the sense of wanting the work to be accurate and complete and properly used. But I have not cared about the people receiving the outcome, not in the way that makes the distribution feel like something other than a transaction.
He thought: this is what it feels like when the work is not separate from the people.
He put this thought in the same place he had been putting a related set of thoughts and went back to the work.
He thought, in the quiet of the Archive in the late afternoon of the twenty-fifth day, about what it meant to have three days left. Not counting. Observing. Three days was a specific amount of time. It was enough time to finish the preparation and not enough time to second-guess the preparation. This was a good amount of time. He had learned, over nine years of engagements, that the most dangerous period in any significant project was the period when there was enough time to make changes but not enough time to recover from changes that went wrong. Three days was past that period. Three days was the time for implementation, not revision. He was done revising. He was ready to implement.
He spent the last hour of the twenty-fifth day in the Archive, alone, in the reading room where most of the work had happened.
Lysera had gone. Miron had gone. The Archive was empty except for him and whatever Fen was doing in the restricted sections, which he no longer tried to track. He sat at the table where they had been sitting together for three weeks, looking at the empty chairs and the residue of the work: a few papers he had not yet filed, some notes in different handwritings, a pencil Miron had left behind, the particular quality of a space that has been used intensively for a long time and carries the impression of that use.
He had not been alone in this room very often. Most of the work had happened with at least one other person present. Lysera, consistently. Miron, frequently. Fen, in its own ambiguous way.
The aloneness now had a specific quality. Not empty. Full of what had happened here, the conversations and the comparisons and the annotations and the slow assembly of the picture from its component pieces. The room held the work in the way that rooms hold the activity that has occurred in them. He sat in the room and felt the work around him.
He thought: this is the last evening before everything changes. Tomorrow the ceremony happens. Whatever happens in the ceremony happens. The situation resolves into whatever it resolves into. The loop closes or it does not. He returns or he does not.
He thought about staying. He thought about what it would mean to stay, if staying were possible, if the loop did not close, if there were a way to remain in Elyndor past the ceremony and to see the aftermath of the work he had done here.
He thought: the work here is done. I cannot do the aftermath. The aftermath belongs to the people who live here. That is as it should be.
He thought about what the ceremony would look like from the inside.
He had attended many formal meetings and presentations in his career. He had attended board meetings and audit committee meetings and regulatory presentations and shareholder assemblies. He had sat at tables and stood at podiums and watched rooms process information they had not wanted to receive.
The ceremony was different from all of those in one specific way: the people attending it had not come to receive information. They had come to witness a ritual. Their posture going in was one of reception rather than analysis, which was both an advantage and a complication. Reception was open in a way that analysis was not. The audience would be in the state that made new information most easily received, which was the state of ritualized attention, the state of being present for something that mattered.
The complication was that the ritual had a specific expected arc, and the presentation would insert itself into that arc and redirect it, and the redirection would be felt as a disruption even when the content of the presentation was accurate and important. Disruption of ritual created a specific kind of discomfort, distinct from the intellectual discomfort of receiving unwanted information. Ritual disruption was felt in the body as well as the mind.
He would not be able to avoid this. The disruption was the point. The ritual needed to be redirected because the ritual as currently constituted was the ceremony of the falsified document. Redirecting it was not incidental to the presentation. It was the presentation.
He had made peace with this. He thought the people he was working with had made peace with it too. He thought the Drakonir delegation, walking into a ceremony that had been designating them as monsters for three hundred years and standing in it as what they actually were, had made the most profound peace with it of anyone.
He left the Archive at the end of the twenty-fifth day and walked back to the palace in the evening light. The palace had the quality it had in the last days before a major event: a heightened kind of attention in all its surfaces, the ceremonial preparations visible in the arrangements of the corridors and the particular quality of movement of the staff who were organizing things. He walked through all of this without stopping, back to his room, and sat down at the small desk with his notebook and the pen and wrote the notes for the day and then sat quietly for a while, looking at nothing in particular. Three days. He was ready. He went to sleep.
He thought about what three days felt like in the context of everything that had come before them. Twenty-six days of work and three days until the ceremony. The ratio was almost right: you did the work and then you had a small amount of time in which the work was either adequate or it was not, and you found out which. He had always found this period clarifying rather than anxious, because by the time it arrived the work was done and the anxiety would not improve the work. The work was what it was. It would be adequate or it would not. He believed it would be adequate. He went to sleep.
He wrote one final note in the margin of the plan for the ceremony, below all the other notes: the Drakonir have been waiting for three hundred years. Three days is nothing. It is less than nothing. It is the width of the door that has been closed for three centuries, finally opening. He underlined this and put the notebook away and went to sleep and did not dream about any of the things he had been thinking about, which was a mercy.
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Miron was released on the morning of the twenty-fifth day.
Not by Caerion's direct order, or at least not visibly. The release was processed through the council records office's administrative protocol, with the notation that the detention had been resolved pending further investigation, which was the bureaucratic equivalent of a non-answer that allowed all parties to proceed without anyone explicitly acknowledging what had happened.
Miron arrived at the Archive with the expression of a man who had spent twenty-four hours in a very small room and had emerged from it more rather than less resolved about everything.
He said: They did not ask me anything.
Renji said: I know.
Miron said: They detained me and said nothing and then released me with a notation that further investigation was pending.
Renji said: Caerion is managing. The detention was a signal, not an interrogation. He wanted to show us that he could affect the process. He wanted to see how we would respond.
Miron said: How did you respond?
Renji said: I told him that we would proceed with or without his cooperation, starting this morning.
Miron said: And he released me.
Renji said: He released you. He looked at Miron carefully. Are you well?
Miron said: I am well. I am annoyed. He sat down. He said: I have been working on this for eleven years and I was detained for twenty-four hours the day after we found the evidence that completes the case. The timing is particularly frustrating.
He said: I know. That is my fault. I should have moved more quickly.
Miron said: You are not an expert in clandestine operations. Neither am I. We did what we could with the time and information we had. He paused. What happens now?
He said: Now we prepare the presentation. The ceremony is in four days. I want to present the covenant at the ceremony, in the presence of Ravenna and the Drakonir delegation, alongside the documented comparison of the covenant to the Prophecy. I want Thalion Orr to understand what the sword trial failure means before the ceremony proceeds.
Miron said: He will resist.
He said: Thalion Orr or Caerion?
Miron said: Both. But differently. Caerion will manage. Thalion Orr's resistance will be less calculated.
He said: I spoke with Thalion Orr yesterday. He has been holding an observation about the sword trial that he has not reported. I think he is closer to understanding than his public position suggests.
Miron said: How close?
He said: Close enough that the right conversation might take him the rest of the way. The problem is that the right conversation requires someone who understands what happened with the sword mechanism and can explain it to him in terms that are not threatening to everything he has built his identity around.
Miron said: Not you.
He said: Definitely not me. I am the verification consultant. I represent the challenge to his identity. He needs someone he trusts.
Miron said: Elirane.
He said: Elirane.
They sat with this for a moment.
Then Miron said: She is the Princess of Leaves. The Prophecy says he will marry her. She is, in his understanding of the world, his future. If she tells him the Prophecy is wrong about what he is supposed to do, the message comes from someone he is, by his conditioning, already predisposed to hear.
He said: Yes. He paused. I need to talk to her before I talk to him.
He thought, for a moment, about the specific shape of this situation: a man who had been prepared from childhood to be a hero in a specific narrative, and a woman who had been designated from childhood as a prize in that narrative, and both of them having come, independently and through different paths, to the understanding that the narrative was wrong. And the question of whether that shared understanding could become the basis for something different from what the narrative had planned for both of them.
He wrote: three days. Miron is back. Elirane needs to talk to Thalion Orr. Ravenna's delegation needs to arrive in the city without causing an incident. The comparison document needs to be delivered to the Council's administrative record so that it cannot be simply suppressed. And Caerion needs to decide whether he is going to manage the presentation or fight it, because that decision will determine the specific form the ceremony takes.
He wrote: I have been in Elyndor for twenty-five days. Three more.
He spent the afternoon of the twenty-fifth day distributing the comparison document.
Three copies, as planned: one to Lysera, one to Elirane, one to Ravenna. He also made a fourth copy and delivered it to the council records office with a formal request that it be entered into the administrative record as a verification consultant's finding in the consultancy contract between the Oracle's office and Renji Aoyama of Kamida Logistics Group's audit department, Tokyo, Japan.
The administrative clerk who received this fourth copy looked at it, looked at him, and looked at the cover page again. She said: This is a very long document.
He said: Yes.
She said: The subject is the Verdant Prophecy.
He said: Yes.
She said: The verification consultant's finding is that it is not original.
He said: The verification consultant's finding is that it is a modification of an earlier document, the Veylwood Covenant, and that the nature and extent of the modification is described in the forty-seven sections that follow.
She looked at him for a long moment. Then she date-stamped the document and entered it in the administrative record and put it in the files.
He said: I would like a receipt for the administrative submission.
She gave him a receipt. He folded the receipt and put it in his document bag, in the section he used for completed deliverables. He went back to the Archive.
Lysera said, when he returned: Did the submission go through?
He said: Yes. He showed her the receipt.
She looked at the receipt with the quality of attention she brought to documents that mattered. She said: Once it is in the administrative record, it requires a formal Council resolution to remove it. Caerion cannot remove it unilaterally.
He said: That is the point.
She said: Yes. She paused. You have been very systematic about this.
He said: I have been very systematic about everything. It is a professional habit.
She said, and there was something in her voice that was not quite amusement but was in its direction: I know. I have been watching for three weeks. She paused. I find it, if I am honest, rather admirable.
He said: The systematic part?
She said: All of it.
He processed this for a moment. He said: Thank you.
She said: You are welcome.
They returned to their work. The Archive was quiet. Three days remained.
The afternoon of the twenty-fifth day, with the comparison document distributed and Miron returned and the plan confirmed, had a quality that he recognized from prior engagements: the quality of the day before the delivery.
In his professional life, the day before the delivery of a major finding had a specific texture. The work was done. The documentation was complete. The presentation was prepared. There was nothing substantive left to do except wait for the moment when everything he had assembled would be placed before the people who needed to receive it and would either change things or not change them.
He had learned, over nine years of days-before-deliveries, that this particular texture was both clarifying and uncomfortable. Clarifying because the work was complete and nothing remained that required his specific attention. Uncomfortable because the absence of immediate work gave space to questions he had been too busy to fully address: was the case actually as strong as he believed it was, had he missed something, was there a flaw in the methodology that would undermine the presentation when it was under pressure.
He examined these questions systematically, because systematic examination was better than diffuse anxiety. The case was as strong as he believed it was. He had not missed anything significant. The methodology was sound. He had three independent lines of evidence converging on the same conclusion, which was the strongest evidentiary structure available in this kind of work.
He was ready.
He was also aware of a different quality of discomfort, one that was not professional but personal. He was aware of it in the way you become aware of something that has been present for a while when the other things that were occupying your attention subside. He was aware of it and he did not know what to do with it in the current context and so he put it in the same place he had been putting it and went back to working on the ceremonial schedule.
The distribution of the comparison document had been accomplished with a particular satisfaction he associated with the completion of a significant deliverable.
He had distributed findings before. He had sent reports through channels, submitted documentation to committees, provided evidence to regulatory bodies. In almost every case, the distribution had been a moment of release: here is what I found, the finding is now yours to do with what you will, my role in this specific engagement is complete.
This distribution felt different.
This distribution felt like the beginning rather than the completion of his role. Not because his role would extend beyond the ceremony. His role would probably end with the ceremony, or shortly after it. The loop would close. He would return to Tokyo.
But the distribution of this specific document, to these specific people, in this specific context, felt like an act of commitment rather than release. He was not releasing the finding. He was sharing it. There was a difference, and the difference was in the nature of the relationship between him and the people he was sharing it with.
In every prior engagement, the finding had been shared with people who were professionally obligated to receive it: boards, committees, regulatory bodies. They had not chosen to receive it. They had been required to receive it by the institutional structures that governed the engagement. The finding was a deliverable. They were the delivery destination. The relationship was professional and transactional.
Here the finding was shared with Lysera, who had spent sixty years preparing for the moment when this finding would be possible. With Elirane, who had been carrying a piece of the finding in the form of a childhood memory for eighty-four years. With Ravenna, who represented three hundred years of the other party holding their version of the same truth. The finding was shared with people who had skin in it, who had been part of producing it, who had a relationship to the truth it described that was personal rather than institutional.
He thought: I have never distributed a finding to people I cared about the outcome for before. I have cared about the outcome professionally, in the sense of wanting the work to be accurate and complete and properly used. But I have not cared about the people receiving the outcome, not in the way that makes the distribution feel like something other than a transaction.
He thought: this is what it feels like when the work is not separate from the people.
He put this thought in the same place he had been putting a related set of thoughts and went back to the work.
He thought, in the quiet of the Archive in the late afternoon of the twenty-fifth day, about what it meant to have three days left. Not counting. Observing. Three days was a specific amount of time. It was enough time to finish the preparation and not enough time to second-guess the preparation. This was a good amount of time. He had learned, over nine years of engagements, that the most dangerous period in any significant project was the period when there was enough time to make changes but not enough time to recover from changes that went wrong. Three days was past that period. Three days was the time for implementation, not revision. He was done revising. He was ready to implement.
He spent the last hour of the twenty-fifth day in the Archive, alone, in the reading room where most of the work had happened.
Lysera had gone. Miron had gone. The Archive was empty except for him and whatever Fen was doing in the restricted sections, which he no longer tried to track. He sat at the table where they had been sitting together for three weeks, looking at the empty chairs and the residue of the work: a few papers he had not yet filed, some notes in different handwritings, a pencil Miron had left behind, the particular quality of a space that has been used intensively for a long time and carries the impression of that use.
He had not been alone in this room very often. Most of the work had happened with at least one other person present. Lysera, consistently. Miron, frequently. Fen, in its own ambiguous way.
The aloneness now had a specific quality. Not empty. Full of what had happened here, the conversations and the comparisons and the annotations and the slow assembly of the picture from its component pieces. The room held the work in the way that rooms hold the activity that has occurred in them. He sat in the room and felt the work around him.
He thought: this is the last evening before everything changes. Tomorrow the ceremony happens. Whatever happens in the ceremony happens. The situation resolves into whatever it resolves into. The loop closes or it does not. He returns or he does not.
He thought about staying. He thought about what it would mean to stay, if staying were possible, if the loop did not close, if there were a way to remain in Elyndor past the ceremony and to see the aftermath of the work he had done here.
He thought: the work here is done. I cannot do the aftermath. The aftermath belongs to the people who live here. That is as it should be.
He thought about what the ceremony would look like from the inside.
He had attended many formal meetings and presentations in his career. He had attended board meetings and audit committee meetings and regulatory presentations and shareholder assemblies. He had sat at tables and stood at podiums and watched rooms process information they had not wanted to receive.
The ceremony was different from all of those in one specific way: the people attending it had not come to receive information. They had come to witness a ritual. Their posture going in was one of reception rather than analysis, which was both an advantage and a complication. Reception was open in a way that analysis was not. The audience would be in the state that made new information most easily received, which was the state of ritualized attention, the state of being present for something that mattered.
The complication was that the ritual had a specific expected arc, and the presentation would insert itself into that arc and redirect it, and the redirection would be felt as a disruption even when the content of the presentation was accurate and important. Disruption of ritual created a specific kind of discomfort, distinct from the intellectual discomfort of receiving unwanted information. Ritual disruption was felt in the body as well as the mind.
He would not be able to avoid this. The disruption was the point. The ritual needed to be redirected because the ritual as currently constituted was the ceremony of the falsified document. Redirecting it was not incidental to the presentation. It was the presentation.
He had made peace with this. He thought the people he was working with had made peace with it too. He thought the Drakonir delegation, walking into a ceremony that had been designating them as monsters for three hundred years and standing in it as what they actually were, had made the most profound peace with it of anyone.
He left the Archive at the end of the twenty-fifth day and walked back to the palace in the evening light. The palace had the quality it had in the last days before a major event: a heightened kind of attention in all its surfaces, the ceremonial preparations visible in the arrangements of the corridors and the particular quality of movement of the staff who were organizing things. He walked through all of this without stopping, back to his room, and sat down at the small desk with his notebook and the pen and wrote the notes for the day and then sat quietly for a while, looking at nothing in particular. Three days. He was ready. He went to sleep.
He thought about what three days felt like in the context of everything that had come before them. Twenty-six days of work and three days until the ceremony. The ratio was almost right: you did the work and then you had a small amount of time in which the work was either adequate or it was not, and you found out which. He had always found this period clarifying rather than anxious, because by the time it arrived the work was done and the anxiety would not improve the work. The work was what it was. It would be adequate or it would not. He believed it would be adequate. He went to sleep.
He wrote one final note in the margin of the plan for the ceremony, below all the other notes: the Drakonir have been waiting for three hundred years. Three days is nothing. It is less than nothing. It is the width of the door that has been closed for three centuries, finally opening. He underlined this and put the notebook away and went to sleep and did not dream about any of the things he had been thinking about, which was a mercy.
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